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how are you like while you're with you're significant other's family?
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Depression
September 21, 2010 - 1:37pm
i never noticed how, i could be sad with a smile on my face
how i can be down, when my spirit is up in outer space
like a clown with mascara and a red nose as the base
but underneath he has frown, when the make-up is all erased
......
................
to be continued, all i got so far
July 13, 2011 - 2:59pm
#2
Wow, nice.
October 9, 2010 - 5:12pm
#3
Seems to me that depression does not quite fit the idea of your poem, however it works well in it's own way. This is a good poem, I am looking forward in reading the rest of it 
October 15, 2010 - 3:29pm
#4
*jealous* uh, I wish I can write like some of u on here. Btw, cheer up. No need to be sad when I'm here. 

You're not a clown./
So why do you have to frown?/
Are you feeling a bit down?/
Here, let me type my respond./
Smile already, c'mon!/
Your spirit is up in outer space./
But you're trap in your own maze./
Now it's time for you to face./
You're feeling a bit daze./
Let me switch up the case./
All your sadness would be erased./
Look at the other side and embrace./