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how are you like while you're with you're significant other's family?
shy
36%
dislike them
7%
comfortable
29%
talkative
29%
simply just stay away
0%
other/s
0%
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Dripped Dropped

Rok
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Warmth and happiness fills inside me
The wholesome feeling that I dream
The night sky weeps flaking wet ice particles
Frost and chills as the wind slowly follows

Friendly open voices crowds the air
Soothing and cheerful to my eavesdropping ear
I wonder my eyes delighted and quickly
Grasping images of the lights that wonders me

But as one has come another must go
What's set for me, I already know
Opening the door they all left me
Alone and saddened as I watch them wave gladly

The warmth, the happiness that was once inside of me
This wholesome feeling that I thought was a dream
Perished within seconds as air fills their spots
Drip drop, drip drop, it dripped and it dropped

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Woohoo...you are one heck of a poet! Now I have this lonely feeling. You got me thinking too soon Rok. Stare lol

Green3r ME--
There's No End to a Beginning That Never Started

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I just thought that I would take a different route to expressing myself this time by writing a poem. Usually I would write a blog or come up with a beat but I just thought that I would change things a little bit. I'm just surprised that after it already happened, I was able to write the poem.

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We as humans always feel more after everything has already been said and done. Sometimes I don't understand why is it that after someone or everyone is gone, we're able to express ourselves in a different way that we wish they were there to see? After reading your poem, it brought back the emptiness that I once had, but had suppressed it deep down hoping that it'll bring me light instead.

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There's No End to a Beginning That Never Started

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hey im with stupid, u cant write poem lol... u copy and paste dont lie, lol.... and if u do know how to write one, u learn from me nigga so fuk offf.. u copy cat, stop trying to take my exs lover green, but u can have her...... i do her too much

fuk green my exs

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IGNORE

I'll See You In Hellven. If I Don't, I'll Still Know You're There Somewhere.

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I'll just take that as a compliment because it looked like I copied and pasted this. Don't trust me? Google the first two phrases and you won't be able to find a single poem like this.

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Love it. It was gloomy and it really made me feel sad as I read it. The words came alive and I almost heard the drips and drops.

"Life is about reinventing yourself time and time again
It's okay to change, as long as you still have the original."
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Smile I like.

I'll See You In Hellven. If I Don't, I'll Still Know You're There Somewhere.

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