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how are you like while you're with you're significant other's family?
shy
36%
dislike them
7%
comfortable
29%
talkative
29%
simply just stay away
0%
other/s
0%
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"LOVE"
October 17, 2009 - 10:53pm
Since it seems that all you guys care to read are love poems, here one I wrote.
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It’s floating like a helicopter on pause
A butterfly frozen in time
Rain coming to a stop
Love, it doesn’t come on time
It doesn’t care when we want it
It only knows to appear like a breeze
The feeling of falling without a net
Love, it doesn't come and go so easily
After the person is gone,
The urge to see them still remains
It’s stuck on auto with a broken button
Love, it doesn’t wait
It’s like a cloud of pain, a cycle unchanged
You can’t bottle it up and save it
When it’s over, it will never be the same
Love, its’ obligations are always fulfilled
December 6, 2009 - 5:05am
#2
lol i haven't checked this in a while, thanks for reading karen.
December 7, 2009 - 1:13am
#3
LoL you don't come check these, but you're in the chat? Haha.
October 29, 2009 - 6:17am
#4
Nice.
December 7, 2009 - 11:13am
#5
Nice..Trying to get inspiration from poems on Hp...gotta submit one to qualify for scholarships. Keep writing and best of luck.
Johnnie
December 7, 2009 - 1:35pm
#6
thanks johnnie, good luck to you too. Just write about what you know and what you want to write. reading other's work is a good way og getting inspiration
August 5, 2010 - 12:49pm
#7
Great poem consisting of good grammar 
I like your comparisons! However, I believe you can go more in depth of all the things that you mention with more deeper feelings too (: If you do go more in depth with deeper emotions do tell me so I can read it! 
August 10, 2010 - 1:27am
#8
Thank you. I wish I could have gone more into depth, but I can't force my writing you know? If that's all I had to express, and I added more to it, it would have ruined it, but I'll post something deeper whenever I write it. Thanks again.
August 10, 2010 - 8:43am
#9
ooo you are welcome! 
ruined it? noooo I don't think you would ruin it at all. I believe that when a person express their emotions from the bottom of their heart when doing something, it really has meaning and it means a lot
Cool! I'll read your poem whenever you are done writing it. 
You are welcome again
Nice one. My favorite line is "It's stuck on auto with a broken button". Makes one smile LoL.
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