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Who will be/get married first?
Jang (Kanibeat)
14%
Luke (dis_guy)
19%
Pao (ECI)
9%
Chris (Tomato Sauce)
2%
Peter (Salavong Ninja)
30%
Rok (Rok)
26%
Total votes: 43
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Refused love
February 17, 2010 - 3:18am
I searched for you, reached for you to feast on you
I spun my hair and twirled our memories, but I could never taste the victory
Maybe because the thoughts of you are too vintage to review
Too yesterday to get a grip of, but I can't seem to free
Myself either. Everytime I recollect your words
It just doesn't do your voice any justice, it can't be heard
I almost want to pick up the phone and pronounce verbs
In my sweetest tongue, in hopes of striking a nerve
In hopes of drawing you back in to love you
To treasure you and lock you away, to own you
Evil? How? I just want to be with you, to care for you
The way no other women could. Come, let me share with you
My future wishes and blue prints. Don't be coy
This is not the time to fool around and toy
with my emotions. I really want you; want to be a part of you
Mentally and physically connected. Give me a pice of you, please?
I'll blend it with my heart, plaster it on my lungs so when I breathe
I'll always have a fresh breathe of you. Why don't you stop the games?
Lets make peace and sleep under the moon, and if it falls, we'll hold on with ease
Because our minds are entwined, nothing could possibly seperate our names.
Sincerely,
-J
February 17, 2010 - 7:27pm
#2
Thanks..sorry to correct you, but if I may, is it not "written" instead of wrote? lols anyways, it was for no one in particular, the first line just came to my mind and I elaborated on it, this is how it turned out. Most of my writing is that way.
February 17, 2010 - 8:50pm
#3
Hrmm. For some reason, while I was reading this, I got goosebumps.
February 17, 2010 - 9:54pm
#4
lols is that a bad thing? If so, I am sorry :/
February 18, 2010 - 6:13pm
#7
wow, well done. while reading this, images were created in my mind. hehe
February 18, 2010 - 8:28pm
#8
I'm glad I was able to come into your mind and create images with words. lols thanks
February 18, 2010 - 6:21pm
#9
I love this poem. It was well written. This has so much meaning to it. It seem like it was written for someone but you don't want to admit it. *wink wink* LOL! Good work Jin!
February 18, 2010 - 8:27pm
#10
LMAO ey...well maybe you're right, but only partially. I guess in everything we write, a little part of ourself is in the poetry. It's not dedicated to anyone, but bits and pieces are about me in one way or another.
February 18, 2010 - 7:31pm
#11
I like it Sis. 
February 18, 2010 - 8:27pm
#12
thanks sis
February 18, 2010 - 8:32pm
#13
Well I really enjoy reading this.
February 19, 2010 - 12:00am
#14
thanks ey 
Nicely wrote....to whom did you write it to
~kouness is awesomeNESS