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how are you like while you're with you're significant other's family?
shy
36%
dislike them
7%
comfortable
29%
talkative
29%
simply just stay away
0%
other/s
0%
Total votes: 14

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February 17, 2010 - 3:18am
Jinaddiction
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Carry on.
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I searched for you, reached for you to feast on you
I spun my hair and twirled our memories, but I could never taste the victory
Maybe because the thoughts of you are too vintage to review
Too yesterday to get a grip of, but I can't seem to free
Myself either. Everytime I recollect your words
It just doesn't do your voice any justice, it can't be heard
I almost want to pick up the phone and pronounce verbs
In my sweetest tongue, in hopes of striking a nerve
In hopes of drawing you back in to love you
To treasure you and lock you away, to own you
Evil? How? I just want to be with you, to care for you
The way no other women could. Come, let me share with you
My future wishes and blue prints. Don't be coy
This is not the time to fool around and toy
with my emotions. I really want you; want to be a part of you
Mentally and physically connected. Give me a pice of you, please?
I'll blend it with my heart, plaster it on my lungs so when I breathe
I'll always have a fresh breathe of you. Why don't you stop the games?
Lets make peace and sleep under the moon, and if it falls, we'll hold on with ease
Because our minds are entwined, nothing could possibly seperate our names.

Sincerely,

-J

"Life is about reinventing yourself time and time again
It's okay to change, as long as you still have the original."
-J

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February 17, 2010 - 4:04am
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If you're reading this you must be intrest me in... haha
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Nicely wrote....to whom did you write it to

~kouness is awesomeNESS

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February 17, 2010 - 7:27pm
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Carry on.
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Thanks..sorry to correct you, but if I may, is it not "written" instead of wrote? lols anyways, it was for no one in particular, the first line just came to my mind and I elaborated on it, this is how it turned out. Most of my writing is that way.

"Life is about reinventing yourself time and time again
It's okay to change, as long as you still have the original."
-J

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February 17, 2010 - 8:50pm
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Chatroom keeps kicking me out. >_>
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Hrmm. For some reason, while I was reading this, I got goosebumps.

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February 17, 2010 - 9:54pm
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Carry on.
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lols is that a bad thing? If so, I am sorry :/

"Life is about reinventing yourself time and time again
It's okay to change, as long as you still have the original."
-J

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February 18, 2010 - 11:47am
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Chatroom keeps kicking me out. >_>
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LOL. No, dear. It's a good thing.
It shows how well written your poem is.

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February 18, 2010 - 2:51pm
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Carry on.
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okay that's good then, whew! lols thanks

"Life is about reinventing yourself time and time again
It's okay to change, as long as you still have the original."
-J

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February 18, 2010 - 6:13pm
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steals people's insanity!
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wow, well done. while reading this, images were created in my mind. hehe

Green3r ME--
There's No End to a Beginning That Never Started

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February 18, 2010 - 8:28pm
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Carry on.
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I'm glad I was able to come into your mind and create images with words. lols thanks

"Life is about reinventing yourself time and time again
It's okay to change, as long as you still have the original."
-J

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February 18, 2010 - 6:21pm
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Let's fly!
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I love this poem. It was well written. This has so much meaning to it. It seem like it was written for someone but you don't want to admit it. *wink wink* LOL! Good work Jin!

Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄ƷEy is a GIRL!Innocent

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February 18, 2010 - 8:27pm
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Carry on.
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LMAO ey...well maybe you're right, but only partially. I guess in everything we write, a little part of ourself is in the poetry. It's not dedicated to anyone, but bits and pieces are about me in one way or another.

"Life is about reinventing yourself time and time again
It's okay to change, as long as you still have the original."
-J

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February 18, 2010 - 7:31pm
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Sometimes, I Wonder.
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I like it Sis. Smile

I'll See You In Hellven. If I Don't, I'll Still Know You're There Somewhere.

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February 18, 2010 - 8:27pm
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Carry on.
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thanks sis

"Life is about reinventing yourself time and time again
It's okay to change, as long as you still have the original."
-J

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February 18, 2010 - 8:32pm
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Let's fly!
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Well I really enjoy reading this.

Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄ƷEy is a GIRL!Innocent

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February 19, 2010 - 12:00am
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Carry on.
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thanks ey Laughing out loud

"Life is about reinventing yourself time and time again
It's okay to change, as long as you still have the original."
-J

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August 9, 2010 - 9:04pm
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Know; I don't care. :D
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It hurts when you want something the most and it's right there but you can't grab a hold of it.

I hate to mention this, but I guess sometimes it's just best that somethings are kept quiet.

-No one cares. So, I'm gonna be happy for myself.-

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