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how are you like while you're with you're significant other's family?
shy
50%
dislike them
4%
comfortable
21%
talkative
14%
simply just stay away
4%
other/s
7%
Total votes: 28

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This is a Sad Love Poem called, "Promise" by sweet for a special person.

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sad love poem
by sweet

promise

i can tell and feel your sadness,
when your lover is gone.
i am truly sorry for and feel very bad,
but i want to be the one who won't be gone,
if i ever be with you.
becasue i promise you,
if i get a chance with you;
i will never let that tear come off,
i will never let ur smiles faded away,
i will never let u get bored,
i will always love you,
i will always be there for you,
i will always say "i luv u",
and i will always hold ur hand and walk that road with the one who i love.

i am sorry,
that in the past,
your lover wasn't fit one in your heart,
but today,
we met,
i promise you,
you will be forever happy in our hearts.
i love you.

you are the owner of my heart,
and will always be,
because you can do anything with it,
like how when its beats,
its saying, "i love u",
and when it's stop,
it want to tell something,
do you know what it is?
when its stop,
it take the time to say,
I Promise You,
You will always be smiling.

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i mess up,

its should have been

your lover wasn't fit one in your heart,

your lover wasn't the one in your heart,

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Sweet i got to say i love your poem, it is very touching. Sad(

Its amazing how a smile can hide anything