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how are you like while you're with you're significant other's family?
shy
50%
dislike them
4%
comfortable
21%
talkative
14%
simply just stay away
4%
other/s
7%
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This is a sad love poem is for a sperical person called "Gone"

November 3, 2010 - 6:45pm
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sad love poem
by sweet

gone

i love u, my love.
ur were my smiles,
but when ur gone by my side,
my heart hurt like thousand of daggers stabbing it.

ur my love that i cherish,
forever and ever.
i wont 4get this love of urs,
because its valuable to me.
my love, when u gone,
i want to be gone with u.
so we can be gone together,
and meet whereever we go,
and to love again.

i love u,
ur more than my life, ur my universe.

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November 3, 2010 - 9:53pm
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This is actually nice.
Some grammatical errors here and there, but nice overall.

I'll See You In Hellven. If I Don't, I'll Still Know You're There Somewhere.

[kc]

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May 22, 2011 - 1:33am
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Nyob zoo os everyone.
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KC, are you serious?! You actually thought that this poem was nice? Lmfao!!!!!!!
Either what you said was a joke or it's out of sarcasm... maybe it's both? ^_^

Sweet, give up on your poem.

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May 22, 2011 - 11:47am
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I was hardly kidding. -_-'
That kid may not be liked much, but sometimes, he can come up with some interesting things.
I just have to put it out of my mind that he's who he is. LOL. xD

I'll See You In Hellven. If I Don't, I'll Still Know You're There Somewhere.

[kc]

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November 4, 2010 - 1:38pm
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ummmm kc, ofc is nice, its by me

oh grammer? lol.... yeah its bad lol

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November 4, 2010 - 10:43pm
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Lol I suggest working on your grammer skills along with further improving your writing skills then.

I'll See You In Hellven. If I Don't, I'll Still Know You're There Somewhere.

[kc]

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November 4, 2010 - 2:16pm
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Know; I don't care. :D
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Good one.

-No one cares. So, I'm gonna be happy for myself.-

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November 4, 2010 - 4:39pm
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Love is when you shed a tear&still want her,its when she ignores you&you still love her,its when she loves another guy,but you still smile&say I am happy for you,when all you really do is cry
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i like it Big smile

"Be happie in everything you do in life, keep your promises, cherish everyone that comes and goes your way, and most importantly...remember to always smile for me..." -mai 03.22.10

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November 5, 2010 - 1:08pm
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Sweet, i love it. Expect you have grammer probs like Kc said.

………………./ *_)
….. _.—-._/../ Rawr Means
…../…………./ I Love You In
__/..(…|.(…|) Dinosaur♥♥♥
/__.-|_|–|_|

♥Kⓐтⓗiⓔ♥

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November 5, 2010 - 2:34pm
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okies lol

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November 15, 2010 - 2:51pm
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My little box of empty dreams is filling up too fast, The more I put away for later, The less this feeling lasts
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nice Laughing out loud

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November 16, 2010 - 3:23pm
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ty ty ty

=)

have a nice day

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November 16, 2010 - 3:23pm
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ty ty ty

=)

have a nice day

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November 16, 2010 - 3:24pm
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ty ty ty

=)

have a nice day

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May 22, 2011 - 7:49pm
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lmaoooooooooooooo

condemmed is a hater lollllll

stupid bishhhhh

kc lmaooo
what a faill

u know u love my poemm

lmaoooooo

lmaooooo

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