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how are you like while you're with you're significant other's family?
shy
36%
dislike them
7%
comfortable
29%
talkative
29%
simply just stay away
0%
other/s
0%
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This poem is called: "Ignored!"

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Why did you try so hard to catch our attention?
You wrote a poem, our names were even mentioned.
Should I reply or should I take precaution
Wanted our attention? Was that your intentions?
Well good for you because you've got it all.
You threw the ball and it bounced back from the wall.
Right into your face slamming you causing you to fall.
Poor kid sweet, get back up and stand tall.
I don't want to be negative but I can't be positive.
Why should I be positive when you're always negative?
You're ego's so high and your poems aren't even creative.
Are you simply talking or trying to be narrative?
Unfortunately you failed, at both talking and narrating.
Your speech dialogs are broken, hard to understand what you're saying.
Are you trying to show us that you're not speaking, instead mumbling?
Now is this enough questions for your lonely self to start answering?
You must agree that you're a bit lonely.
Alone and depressed, a little unhappy.
A trouble little kid with issues, one too many.
In my eyes, you're still a nobody.
And about those five days that you have given to me.
I'm still alive and I'm more than breathing.
I'm speaking and unharmed most importanly I'm still standing.
It's so ridiculous how you kept on threatening me.
What was your excuse again, you were off and pimping?
You had no time for me because you were too busy kissing?
Too busy grasping, partying and dancing?
So after threatening me, that's what you went of doing?
Maybe you were just too chicken to do anything.
What are you going to do, continue on threatening?
Keep threatening everyone because they're just ignoring.
They know how you are, they know you're just fooling.

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Damn poets.

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I am not a poet.

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You are too a poet.

Hehe, I like. Big smile

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lol This is nice. You make me laugh Rok. hahaha

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Wooooooooooooot Rok!!

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NIGGA DID U JUST EMBRASSED ME? AWWW HELLO NO MAN

ITS ON, WHEN I SEE U, UR KNOW WAT HAPPEN
JUST WAIT TILL FRESNO NEW YR START SONNNNNNNNNNNNN

I NOT A TROUBLE KID? IM A ADULT, 19 YRS OLD, AND HOW OLD R U? 12? LLMAO NOOB
UR R 12 TAT Y U DONT SAY UR AGE LMAO LOL...... NOOOBBBBBBBBBB

P.S FUK GREEN

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hey im with stupid, u copy me on topic lol

this poem is called?

see i jux prove to u that i better than u lol...
u copy me cuz u not good like me lol

ownage son

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I can't help but snicker at this kid's posts.
He's so full of himself, despite the fact that he's a total pathetic creature.

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LOL I smelled a dead rat on the loose...

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For your information, your age doesn't make you an adult but your manners does. Oh yeah, and about you know what, threatening me again? Remember the first time you threatened me? It didn't go through idiot. I was hoping it would go through so I could upload a video of you getting your ass kicked, not by me, but the snowy weather here. Slipping on ice, tripping, freezing, I need only to tap your head and you'll fall back. Poor kid, are you fed up with me is that why you claim you're the best? Sure, I copied your IGNORE but for one reason, it was to catch your stupid attention because without having your lame words, you wouldn't even show up here.

Now, let me ask you, did you fully understand what I simply wrote to you in my poem? Of course not, big words were everywhere, at least big words that only you and a three year old wouldn't know. What if I am twelve? That only proves that I'm far more intelligent than you are because I can type my English properly while on the other hand watch you struggle to find the definition of the simple words I used.

Lastly, you must be so desperate to win that you had to post multiple times. Both times insulting me with the exact same method. Sorry to inform you kid but you're nothing compared to me. At least I don't make up lies about myself to make others praise me. And I also don't impersonate others just to tell everyone else that they should be nice to you because you're a good kid. Unfortunately you fail at everything you do kid. Give up, you've lost the war. You've got everyone on HP against you and you're stressing from the aggressiveness that everyone is directing towards you.

P.S. I did not embarrass you because you completed that task all by yourself.

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damnz...very good ones. =]

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nigga i did it all by myself? give me a reason how? and how old r u? ur really 12 that y u dont say lol............

and u dont use and to started a sentence

example

i went to the store. And

gosh ur dumbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb

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Someone with such bad grammar dare to criticize my sentence structure? Do you feel smarter now that you know one fact? Of course we were all taught not to use "And" to start a sentence but later on as you ascend in grade school, you're also taught that "And" can perfectly be structure to introduce a sentence. Idiotic imbecile. Are you now going to tell me that you were not so fortunate to fully attend school? Try to make me pity you, I dare you to.

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You need to go back to school to learn the structures of poems.

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so beautiful and your poem bring out the bittersweetness in the truth like the morning fog that hide everything away!!!!!

Music Soothe My Soul

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hey im with stupid i dont get this? wat it mean
Idiotic imbecile. Are you now going to tell me that you were not so fortunate to fully attend school? Try to make me pity you, I dare you to.

dont use strong words stupid fool
and i too tired to go to dictionary nigga
i need time for my anal movies

expected stfu

p.s fuk green

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LoL. This is just funny.

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ooOo...the little retarded hmongboi knows that he's a smelly dead rat. ahahaha He's pretty smart to know what he is. ROFL

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ablis stfu
kc suck my ball
green suck my ball too bitchhhhh

wat u want to? i know u do

bitchhh azz green its over

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You start out your poem beautifully revealing your emotions. Throughout your poem you unfold the truth to your audience.
Fabulous poem towards the particular hater Laughing out loud
Keep up the good work Smile

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