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how are you like while you're with you're significant other's family?
shy
50%
dislike them
4%
comfortable
21%
talkative
14%
simply just stay away
4%
other/s
7%
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in that MN state of Mind
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Mai…
I hear you calling
See you there crying
I know the boys keep breaking your heart
It left you marks, just tore you apart
The other boys got you all wrong
That guy said “I love yous” so you gave him your body and soul
But he took your soul and gave your body away
Till this day you strayed away
Now longer trust men, but you just can’t keep away

Mai…
I’ve seen those tears
Here!...these are yours, broken pieces that I try to piece together
It no longer holds so I kept it in this letter with the others
Next to the May’s, Pa’s and single mothers
I hear you calling
Heard those boys still wanna dance with you
Chant to shake it a little longer
Making them fall in love with you
But they don’t love you, just love what you are

Mai…
You weren’t those stories being shared
But the more you heard them, the more you start living them
See…you had dreams and you had hope
But when it was lost…you were lost with it
The dreams that was dreamt was gone and I’ll mourn forever
Knowing that that you were here but gone forever…
I know these boys don’t treat you well
They call you names that are often found in hell
…so you walked away, say your goodbyes and farewells

But Mai…
I hear you calling
I saw those tears crying
I’ve written this song for you
Reach my hands out to you
What can I do…
Mai…
I know you’re lonely
And there are days when the pain wins
But know that me and the boys are trying…
…to win you over again
All over again…

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I lost my flash drive... Just like I've lost you...
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Awesome poem....

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Sometimes, I Wonder.
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Nice.... Laughing out loud

I'll See You In Hellven. If I Don't, I'll Still Know You're There Somewhere.

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Chatroom keeps kicking me out. >_>
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Fabulous poem. Definitely one of my favorites that I've seen in here.
Now, only if you were to replace "Mai" with "Karen." Lmfao! Kidding. Tongue

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Know; I don't care. :D
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It was a great poem! However, the last few lines kind of stunned me o.O... are you saying that you are like the other guys? lol. It doesn't quite make sense, but I still think it's a great poem with all your descriptive thoughts and the truths that you tried to reveal in your writing out to your precious friend Laughing out loud I hope when she reads this it brings a smile to her face, makes her day,makes her realize that someone does really care, and hopefully this will wake her up from all her problems Laughing out loud Just watch out because there are alot of mai's out there lol. Laughing out loud

-No one cares. So, I'm gonna be happy for myself.-

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thanks for the kind words

@wiish_yang: well kinda referring to myself and the rest of the guys who aint like the others that we are trying to win "mai" all over again

and mai is jus a metaphor for any girl...it's jus a common hmong name so i used it. thanks

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I want to take a long drive somewhere...
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In that case, this must be from my boy, TOU. Smile

Great poem! Keep tugging at those shattered hearts. Mai will come around when it comes time.

In those eyes I look to see what worlds I can travel with you.

mai
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Love is when you shed a tear&still want her,its when she ignores you&you still love her,its when she loves another guy,but you still smile&say I am happy for you,when all you really do is cry
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WTF? Lmao. Uh.. Why am I jus reading this now?

"Be happie in everything you do in life, keep your promises, cherish everyone that comes and goes your way, and most importantly...remember to always smile for me..." -mai 03.22.10

mai
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Love is when you shed a tear&still want her,its when she ignores you&you still love her,its when she loves another guy,but you still smile&say I am happy for you,when all you really do is cry
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FAWK.. double post. mah bad

"Be happie in everything you do in life, keep your promises, cherish everyone that comes and goes your way, and most importantly...remember to always smile for me..." -mai 03.22.10

mai
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Love is when you shed a tear&still want her,its when she ignores you&you still love her,its when she loves another guy,but you still smile&say I am happy for you,when all you really do is cry
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WTF? Lmao. Uh.. Why am I jus reading this now?

"Be happie in everything you do in life, keep your promises, cherish everyone that comes and goes your way, and most importantly...remember to always smile for me..." -mai 03.22.10